Gladiator's Travels. (RP)

[LethalGT]

A bit bored atm so I decided to do a role playing sort of thread.\

I'll start.


I traveled through the Abyss, alone, the decimate land crunching under my armored feet.I gripped my polearm tightly, ready for any Elyos to dare oppose me. I decided that walking was talking me no where, My wings sprouted from my back, huge black feathered wings ready to take flight. The pitch black wings lifted me into the air and thrusted me forward. I felt the air hit my face and squinted. I traveled quickly but had to land soon due to my flying Debilitations. I landed and the ground cracked and shatter beneath my feet, I fell and prepared for impact, instead of a hard fall on jagged rock I bounced on a spongy material. I landed with a thud on the ground and quickly got up to see where I was. I was in a field, with huge mushrooms five times the size of me. I wondered where I was, but not for long. A huge dragon like man came thrusting at me with a blade from out of the thick mushroom cover. A balaur, I swung my polearm and managed to smash his blade to the side, He lunged his claw at me and I quickly rolled the opposite way. I thrusted my pole arm and smashed through his armor into where his kidney would be. It made it half way through before it stopped. I pulled it from him and decapitated him with swiftness. His blood pooled at my fight. Just before I was about to travel again, a rift 50 feet tall ripped open a couple meters from where I was standing.

[Dimindra]

lol not sure what person your writing that in but nice try nonethless

[Zanaionic]

**protip**-RP usually has little to no limitations in the Basics(everyone has their own style but adding limitations makes it feel less epic) don't take this the wrong way but is English ur first written language. Seems to be written in a strange Twist of First person and 3rd person(the way its written written its hard to understand who You are and who HE is because in the first couple sentences it sounds a bit racy lol { Trhusted his poll arm }.)

In no way am i trying to degrade you nor am i stating myself as an Expert RPer. simply trying to help you make a better one for next time. This particular RP attempt is slightly hard to follow and would be nearly impossible for someone else to join in(none knows who you are {you havent given yourself a name} )....If your particularly interested in Joining in on some Pre-created RP story lines i suggest you go here. Supremacy (a roll playing thread)

[LethalGT]

Originally Posted by Zanaionic

**protip**-RP usually has little to no limitations in the Basics(everyone has their own style but adding limitations makes it feel less epic) don't take this the wrong way but is English ur first written language. Seems to be written in a strange Twist of First person and 3rd person(the way its written written its hard to understand who You are and who HE is because in the first couple sentences it sounds a bit racy lol { Trhusted his poll arm }.)

In no way am i trying to degrade you nor am i stating myself as an Expert RPer. simply trying to help you make a better one for next time. This particular RP attempt is slightly hard to follow and would be nearly impossible for someone else to join in(none knows who you are {you havent given yourself a name} )....If your particularly interested in Joining in on some Pre-created RP story lines i suggest you go here. Supremacy (a roll playing thread)

Lulz I know, I have to redoit because I figured out at the end that I did it in a third person perspective.

Fix'd my RP post.

[CPK1]

All of a sudden a giant llama sprouts from the earth and spits coconuts like a gatling gun flying straight for your face.